powerful paragraph

powerful paragraph
in our paragraph writing we had to use deep words to dis crib something. we used onamatapaer, similes, metaphors, and heaps more we had to give our story's lots of detail and aiming for level 3 and  4
our class used lots of different types of formats and words to meat level 3 & 4. on the paragraph we wrote we used mims and cops to make our story. we wrote about a picture and we could do moment in time, what happens next, or be the person in the camra in the photo