confession
Last week we made a poem that we had to confess something you have done. We needed to use the structure that William Carlos Williams used which was what you have done, and what you were going do with it, then forgive me. So we drafted on a piece of paper then we published it on a shared document. Something I would like to change next time is the confession and use better vocabulary. I enjoyed writing it and refreshing my memory from heaps of years ago. This is an image of my confession:
Wow Hiroshi,
ReplyDeleteamazing work that you have been up to,
I can really tell that you have worked so hard on this poem, and great vocabulary was used during the beginning, middle, and end.
Hiroshi Hi
ReplyDeleteyo Jahn sup
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